Edit and revised a bit the eternal Loverspoem... I hope al

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Sweet Barbie (Account disabled) on Sunday, 19-Oct-2008 7:23:55

As she walks to him, he holds out his arms
he shows his feelings of love and pleasure
She tells him of her secrets
and yet she cries not one tear
The friendship and love they both feel for each
is beyond anyone's reach
The struggles they face day to day only makes them stronger
For fear is invited no longer
True companions against the horrid world that closes them in
And yet they continue to live
through the wounds that cut
the pain that heals
These kind of friends who share this love knows it's ever so real
The bond that never breaks
Tides that rush against the wind
carry their hearts for only a time until they find one another again
Still their friendship grows
and so love's strong
For fear has vanished like the break of dawn
Open your hearts and see with your eyes
These feelings are no disguise
Friends like this come once in a lifetime
For their eternal bliss is just a kiss away!

Post 2 by Ok Sure (This site is so "educational") on Sunday, 19-Oct-2008 14:45:42

I was about to ask, so, when are they hooking up?

Post 3 by margorp (I've got the gold prolific poster award, now is there a gold cup for me?) on Sunday, 19-Oct-2008 17:28:43

Well written